TOFEL写作

Exercise

Confronting some parents assertion that the elder children in the family should take care of the younger, while others hold the view that all the children should be treated equatily, regardless of the age.

Problem: 意思发生改变

题目改写方法

背景句

观点句

I reckon/assure/advocate/argue/contend that

I assert the statement that

From my perspective in my view
From where I stand,
As far as I am concerned,

让步+转折

Although

独立写作思路理由篇

四大题型分类:利弊题、事实题、今昔对比、特殊词。

事实题和利弊题四六开(新手重点解决利弊题)。

利弊题主题句写法

小 Trick:题目中所有的对象都可以分析利弊(老小孩、小小孩、大人)。

利弊题常用解法,万能理由:针对个人。

万能理由 英文表达 笔记(备注)
省钱(性价比高) save money/cost-effective Especially for the poor(极限论证)
省时间(便捷) save time/convenient portable
有效率 Improve efficiency/efficient study/work/
安全(身心健康) safe/physical/mental health 安全类词汇:</br>safe safety(个人安全) </br>secure security(社会安全、安保)</br>unexpended accidents(potential risks)(不可预知的风险)</br>Tsunami(海啸)、tornado(龙卷风)、storm(风暴)</br>健康类词汇(physical):</br>short-sight、lack of exercise、overweight、obesity、diabete、heart attack、influence/strengthen the immune system/ protect sb from infectious disease:flu build muscle/ chese muscle</br>健康类词汇(mental):</br>干正事:(release/relieve/reduce) strsss/pressure/burden -> mentail illness: depression& anxiety&insominia(失眠)-> commit suicide (就自杀) : e.g. the hight suicide rate in Japan </br> 不干正事: mass media -> violent and pornographic information -> mimick the bad behavior -> go astray/ misguided
发掘兴趣爱好 discover one’s interest
扩展知识 broaden one’s horizons /expand one’s knowledge
交朋友(团队精神) make friends(cooperative/collaborative,teamwork spirits)
培养能力 improve skills and develop abilities acdemic(学术能力)</br> practical skill(实践能力)</br> step on the royal road of academics/ part-time/internship/voluntary activities/ time-management(时间管理能力)
增进家人感情 strengthen/reinforce family/relationship/ties/bonds
成就感(自我实现) obtain a sense of accomplishment/achievement(self-fulfillment)